[Writingworkshop] first in a while

[Daniel Peters]

thanks guys.  First draft.  The two lines you just referenced Neale were the
germ of it.   I'm probably going to save them and the silence line for
something better and more thought out.

On Sun, Jan 18, 2009 at 4:50 PM, Neale Morison <neale at nealemorison.com>wrote:

>  Yes, I was mulling.
> But "bent wheel broken leg" has a great rhythm. And "are all these always
> onlys". Funky, dude.
>
> Daniel Peters wrote:
>
> waiting patiently
>
>
>
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>     bent wheel broken leg we was never meant to carry humans
>
>     so tired so tired so tired of all these always onlys
>
>     when was it that we became what you needed
>
>     all we were is what you needed
>
>     all I am is what you needed
>
>     all we are are what we needed when the moment wasn't listening
>
>     turning pages moving reels who was never meant for changing?
>
>     so tired so tired so tired of all these always onlys
>
>     who was I to name my future?
>
>     who was I to call for crossroads?
>
>     who was I to speak for silence as if I knew what it was thinking?
>
>     Patience only costs you if you aren't willing to pay
>
>     Patience only needs you if you aren't offering an arm
>
>     Patience shouldn't care if I keep going
>
>     but so much so when so here
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>     are all these always onlys
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>     and I'm the one who invited them in anyway
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