[Writingworkshop] And?

[Daniel Peters]

Thats really interesting that you caught a bit of onward christian
soldiers....I sent that poem to a fellow poet with the subject line "it
seems all my poems are coming out prayers"

On Sun, Feb 8, 2009 at 10:23 AM, Adam Holland <adam.holland at gmail.com>wrote:

> I like this a lot
> "
> there is no way to find the way
> that finds the way you *want* to be"
>
> the triple "way" is great, because it is confusing at first (slightly)  but
> then the reader (me) realizes that this confusion is appropriate, because
> it's all really the Way, which of course invokes the implication that you
> can't find the way just by wanting it.  Desire is not enough, and that
> explains the initial supposition the poem mentions.  But of course, there is
> a way, and that is, again as the poem reveals, that the Way will find your
> way for you.
> In fact, it  *is* your way. In fact, there are the same, because
> ultimately there is only one Way, and finding your own is merely coming to
> this realization.
>
> On Sat, Feb 7, 2009 at 6:23 PM, Daniel Peters <danieltpeters at gmail.com>wrote:
>
>> fuck.  already see a fix.
>>
>>
>> come with the thunder
>> *from *under whatever *you're* hiding
>> where were you when
>> who you were mattered
>> only cause
>> just because
>> please don't suppose
>> there is no way to find the way
>> that finds the way you *want* to be
>>
>> maybe.  sticking over the "from"
>>
>>
>>
>> On Sat, Feb 7, 2009 at 6:15 PM, Daniel Peters <danieltpeters at gmail.com>wrote:
>>
>>> come with the thunder
>>> under whatever your hiding
>>> where were you when
>>> who you were mattered
>>> only cause
>>> just because
>>> please don't suppose
>>> there is no way to find the way
>>> that finds the way you need to be
>>>
>>>
>>> Love the K and R strunk and white reference.  Solid.
>>>
>>>   On Thu, Feb 5, 2009 at 4:57 AM, Neale Morison <neale at nealemorison.com>wrote:
>>>
>>>> And?
>>>> 2009-02-05
>>>>
>>>> Down and Dirty
>>>> Day and Night
>>>> Kernaghan and Ritchie
>>>> Strunk and White
>>>>
>>>> Gone and Forgotten
>>>> Today and Tomorrah
>>>> Woodward and Bernstein
>>>> Sodom and Gomorrah
>>>>
>>>> Crime and Punishment
>>>> Form and Function
>>>> Old and Grey
>>>> Con and Junction
>>>>
>>>> Astaire and Rogers
>>>> Shake and Shiver
>>>> King and Country
>>>> Stand and Deliver
>>>>
>>>> Belt and Braces
>>>> Old and New
>>>> Airs and Graces
>>>> Me and You
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> --
>>>> Neale Morison
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>>>> http://www.nealemorison.com
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>>>>
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