[Writingworkshop] Evidence treatment

[Neale Morison]

Here is a treatment for the screenplay I am writing on Eileen Garrett.

http://www.nealemorison.org/writing/screenplays/EvidenceSeeTheWindTreatment.pdf

I used an unconventional format because I wanted to use it for feedback 
from Garrett's daughter and granddaughter, with whom I am meeting and 
corresponding.
I would love some feedback on this. There are major problems to solve in 
the storyline and format. I already know some changes I want to make, 
but others suggestions are very welcome.
Neale

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