[Writingworkshop] Stories

[Daniel Peters]

Just got my internet back and had some time to catch up.  I won't add to the
discussion below just yet, just throw out some thoughts.  Umm....fuck yeah?
 Like really, truly, Hell fucking yeah?  I got it about two lines before you
explain 'the sound'.  i was starting to wander a bit, where is this going,
tie it together, btu you did and it works majestically.  Seriously enjoyed
the shit out of that man.  My brother studies improvisational comedy in
Chicago and I would love to send him this if its cool with you. The only
thing that got me was the accent, so well done, was absent from nebs
dialogue when he first meets Bob Hope (bob hope!!!).  I'll have some more
for you after I read it a couple of more times, can't wait to read the other
story.
On 2/29/08, Christopher Robichaud <cjrobi at mit.edu> wrote:
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>  Hey all!
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> Attached are two stories I'll be using for writing program applications
> and eventually to send out for publication. They've already been workshopped
> in Joe's classes over the years and had several other eyes look at them, but
> I appreciate all feedback! If you get the chance, please give 'em a look and
> lemme know what you think.
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> Thanks!
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> -Chris
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