[Writingworkshop] Fluffy draft 6

[Antony Nigel Donovan]

I just finished this (work has been sapping my mental energy).

I think it's wonderful.  I also think we should try to arrange a table
read or more appropriately, stage some of the scenes.  There's so much
here. I think working with performers would help you complete it (and
also, find some of the things that seem wonderful on paper, but perhaps
would lose something when performed).

What do people think?  Any volunteers for any of the parts?  I'll
happily help in anyway I can (but, do to work and family commitments, I
won't be able to give that much time each week but, I'll commit to one
evening a week for two to three hours).

Antony


On Wed, 2008-02-27 at 17:18 -0500, Neale Morison wrote:
> Hi all. I've been obsessing about the goldfish play for the last few 
> days. Here is the latest draft. I would love to hear what you think. It 
> has two new songs and several magic tricks.
> Neale
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